TOPIC: TELEVISION EFFECTS ON CHILDREN

Topic sentence: Television can give bad influence to children.

Supporting sentence:
- Children will forget to study or do other things.
- Can cause many diseases such as gain weight.
- Can give bad influence.
- Change the children behavioral.

Concluding sentence:  In conclusion, television is not entirely bad for children. Therefore, understanding the negative effects of it, parents should monitor and limit the amount of time spending on watching television.

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Connectors used: can, therefore, moreover, conclusion, also, such as, and.

Paragraph

Television can give bad influence to children. There are so many interesting television programs that it might be difficult for children to turn off the television after turning on it. Children might use all day to watch carton channel and they will forget to study or do another thing. It is very harmful for children if they spend most of the time on television. This can cause many diseases by watching television too much, such us gain weight because not enough do physical activities. Television also can give bad influence to children, for examples when they watch movie canton contains the element of violence, they will follow without think twice. Moreover, this kind of channel can impact to children behavioral. In conclusion, television is not entirely bad for children. Therefore, understanding the negative effects of it, parents should monitor and limit the amount of time spending on watching television.

TOPIC : SMOKING CIGARETTES

Topic sentence:  Smoking cigarettes is very dangerous and can make addictive and disease for us.

Supporting sentence:

Ø  -   Heart disease is the leading cause of death and the leading cause of death among Smokers.

Ø  -   Nicotine is the most addictive substance in tobacco.

Ø  -   Smoking causes damage and constriction of blood vessels, leading to various diseases of blood vessels.

Ø  -   Smoking-related deaths are mainly because of heart diseases, cancers and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease.

Concluding sentence:  smoking cigarettes is a very dangerous for us and don’t try to take cigarettes because it does can make addictive.

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Connectors used: such us, also, and, can, conclusion.

Paragraph: Smoking cigarettes is very dangerous and can make addictive and disease for us. The most hazardous substances in cigarettes are tar, which is a carcinogenic substance, nicotine that increases cholesterol levels in the body and carbon monoxide, which decreases the amount of oxygen within the body Smoking decreases the level of oxygen from reaching the tissues, giving rise to different health problems such as strokes, heart attacks or miscarriages. It increases cholesterol levels in the blood, thus increasing the risk of heart attacks. Smoking also causes chronic coughing, shortness of breath, premature aging, recurrent infections and reduced overall fitness.in conclusion smoking cigarettes is a very dangerous for us and don’t try to take cigarettes because it does can make addictive.