TOPIC : SMOKING CIGARETTES

Topic sentence:  Smoking cigarettes is very dangerous and can make addictive and disease for us.

Supporting sentence:

Ø  -   Heart disease is the leading cause of death and the leading cause of death among Smokers.

Ø  -   Nicotine is the most addictive substance in tobacco.

Ø  -   Smoking causes damage and constriction of blood vessels, leading to various diseases of blood vessels.

Ø  -   Smoking-related deaths are mainly because of heart diseases, cancers and chronic obstructive pulmonary disease.

Concluding sentence:  smoking cigarettes is a very dangerous for us and don’t try to take cigarettes because it does can make addictive.

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Paragraph: Smoking cigarettes is very dangerous and can make addictive and disease for us. The most hazardous substances in cigarettes are tar, which is a carcinogenic substance, nicotine that increases cholesterol levels in the body and carbon monoxide, which decreases the amount of oxygen within the body Smoking decreases the level of oxygen from reaching the tissues, giving rise to different health problems such as strokes, heart attacks or miscarriages. It increases cholesterol levels in the blood, thus increasing the risk of heart attacks. Smoking also causes chronic coughing, shortness of breath, premature aging, recurrent infections and reduced overall fitness.in conclusion smoking cigarettes is a very dangerous for us and don’t try to take cigarettes because it does can make addictive.